ONE SWIFT INTAKE
Collective breaths of the masses
One swift intake
exhale
eyes drying out of their wide open sockets
sweat stark against their pallid faces
Silent screams echoing
resounding within
Rigid spines
Hands clenched upon themselves
tight fists to ward away what connot be physically fought
Internal shout.
The masses tightly smile and nod their pale head
at the thing they will never understand
Inexplicable fear.
It drives the masses
hearts pounding with unnecessary rage,
Anger fear hate.
One swift intake
exhale.
First time in ages I've written anything even vaguely worth my time. 10 points to whoever deciphers what it's about.
3 Comments:
a..... mosh pit?
:-D
I deserve a cookie.
I say it's any conformist or group of conformists that ever lived. Posers, followers, brainwashed people, you get the idea. Hey, I could be completely off but you know, that's the way it goes sometimes.
I can see how you'd interpret it that way...that's not exactly what it was about, but I can see how it would fit. It could be about a mosh pit...but I don't give points to the nameless...Damn anonymous people!!!
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